Friday, August 6, 2021

I think we should! Writing T3 W2

 


So this week for writing we had to write a formal letter to someone about what we want to change. I decided to change PCS uniforms to either mufti once a month or your house colour T-shirts (something we have at school for cross country). I thought we should at least have some days of mufti or your house colour T-shirt.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Arniekay,
    Its brooklyn and somethings i really like about your writing is how we should have mufti every friday.

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  2. Well done Arniekay, wonderful persuasive letter. I love the way you have used persuasive words to convince the reader.

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