I am a Year 4 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 12 and my teacher is Miss Izelle. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello Arniekay Your instructions for making a Shoe Box Hotel are very clear and detailed. As I read through them I can see exactly what you have to do to make the construction. Your Shoe Box Hotel is very impressive.
Very impressed with your Shoe Box project Arniekay. Thank you for putting so much effort into your work. Your instructions will help others to do the same.
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Hello Arniekay
ReplyDeleteYour instructions for making a Shoe Box Hotel are very clear and detailed. As I read through them I can see exactly what you have to do to make the construction. Your Shoe Box Hotel is very impressive.
Mr Tetzlaff
Very impressed with your Shoe Box project Arniekay. Thank you for putting so much effort into your work. Your instructions will help others to do the same.
ReplyDeleteThank you Miss Izelle and Mr Tetzlaff
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