I am a Year 4 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 12 and my teacher is Miss Izelle. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Arniekay, this is Mrs Cameron. Thanks for sharing your learning about quality blog comments. I like it how you wrote an introduction so I could understand what you were learning about. Your comic strip is nice and simple too, so that people can remember how to write a good comment. Next time, you could give your post a title to catch people's attention.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
that is nice work must of took you so long
ReplyDeleteKia ora Arniekay, this is Mrs Cameron. Thanks for sharing your learning about quality blog comments. I like it how you wrote an introduction so I could understand what you were learning about. Your comic strip is nice and simple too, so that people can remember how to write a good comment. Next time, you could give your post a title to catch people's attention.
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